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:new: REVAMPED!!! NOW SHE HAS A LOT MORE SHIT ON HER

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 [[you guys oh my god she's not a tsundere she doesn't even have any dere in her]]
» Name: Karen Suzuki

» Nickname/Codename: Taser,  human stun gun, (you'll understand why below )

» Rank: Fighter lvl.4  
(Tracker for myself: 50 xp til next lv.)

» Path: Neutral

» Gender: Female

» Age: 11 

» Height: 4' 2"

» Species: Part Raiju (a japanese yokai or monster that is somehow related to lightning/thunder/electricity.)

» Personality: [Cold][Blunt][Fearless][Clever][Fake]
[Cold] Karen couldn't care less about her manners or what other people think about her, she doesn't act like your typical 11 year old that's sweet and loves compliments. She hates being around strangers, often she'll give you an offensive comment the moment she sees your face.

[Blunt] This trait is kind of similar to being cold, but if you don't look trustworthy (hardly anyone does lmao) she will immediately tell you anything along these lines, "Shut up no one wants to listen to your worthless words" or "What do you want, you think your worthy enough to talk to me? Go look in the mirror to see how miserable you look right now" unless you gained enough trust from her then she'll probably just tell you in a cold tone, "What" but if you get that, then she probably likes you enough to be friends.

[Clever] She usually tries to find a better way of doing things, making plans, etc. She usually calculates everything before doing something, thinking before actions is her way of doing things.

[Fearless] some people may call this trait "Just not giving a single piece of shit" Karen really just goes for it if she has a general plan about it. She usually only shows this when she thinks she can win.

[Fake] Although her real personality is blunt, cold, rude, etc. if making up a fake personality for something is going to benefit her, she'll do it. She knows how to act like a polite, well-trained lady that is friendly and full of love. For example acting like a real sweet 11 year old so she can easily steal things from stores without the store owners noticing or caring. Also she could get closer to them to let their guard down and attack them.

Note: even though she has all these bad qualities, if you gain enough trust from her she'll show kindness to you, no she's not a tsundere she's not going to be like, "oh my god it's not like I'm  friends with you or anything !!/////" She's more likely to say, "What are you doing we're allies right" 

» Abilities/Powers: If she is in a place with at least some electricity, (telephone poles, generators, etc) she can "collect" that much electricity and then she can send electric pulses (?) through her arms with power many times stronger than the original electricity she collected  to her opponent's body, not very strong, but it can be highly effective and almost paralyzing if she uses it with systema, which is her fighting style. She can feel it, but she is sort of "immune" to it (Also she feels it much less since she's "sending it out") since she's used it so many times before. Since it's not too strong, as long as she has the electricity this requires hardly any energy. More info in the "Weapons/Fighting Style". She can also manipulate any nearby electricity and electric waves (such as waves from cellphones, radios etc) So she could cut the electricity throughout the whole section of the city to where the telephone wires are connected to, so if you took her to a generator she could cut the electricity to the whole city. But she only uses this power when she's too lazy to go turn off the light from her bed or something, not very useful.
If you just happen to be fighting with her in a thunder storm, you just threw yourself in a death bed. If there is any lightning, she can "bend" the electricity towards the opponent to hit them. If you are in rain, well. Uh, you better run. This requires a shitton of energy and concentration to control lightning so she prefers not to use it too much.
She's also decent with knives. She doesn't always have perfect aim but she can throw them fast. :new: She can manipulate any sort of electronics running off of batteries, electricity, etc. It depends on how complex the design is though to control it.

Ability descriptions:



Electric ball (kaMEHAMEHAHA)
she's able to form a ball about the size of a Pool ball (billiard, w/e) of sheer electricity. It's much more powerful than the ordinary pulses she sends through her fingers.
she throws it like a normal ball except controlling where it hits is very easy since it's light but it doesn't budge just by wind. It kinda glides across

(sort of far range but she doesn't use it too often and it drains more energy than she wants)

Physical description-
Size: About as big as a Pool ball
It works like a waterballoon and once it hits a hard enough surface (eg a person's body) it will 'pop' and spread into the surface. So if you are hit with it, say your stomach, it'll spread through down to your mid-thigh and up to chest. 

Light trail

She can leave a "trail" of light in mid air, it doesn't do any harm, but it can light up a room for a few seconds. She usually uses this to catch the opponent's eye. 
Useful in dark places.

Physical description:
It's literally a trail of bright light in mid air. (not much needed to say)

Developing:

Electric whip

By concentrating the electricity to one arm, she can form a type of whip made of pure electricity. However, it takes a ton of energy and strength. The longer she holds it, the more energy it drains. So she probably will not use this in battle. Only on occasions. Or if she just wants to show off her skills.

Physical description:
An average whip, except obviously it's bright and sparked with electricity, basically light formed into a whip.

this is still developing and she can't hold it for too long.

Electricity shield:

Right now, she can only create weak ones, just enough to cover her small face, and it shatters like glass per hit. Right now, it takes a lot of focus and energy to create these, so she doesn't use this in battle very much.

As it develops, she'll be able to create a whole force field around her, but that is far into the future.
This skill is the most under-developed. 

Physical description: 
Sort of like a glass shield, except it has blue lines through it, like cracks. 




» Weapon(s)/Fighting Style: //SHORT RANGE//
Systema. Systema is a type of martial arts, it does not require too much strength, instead of powerful kicks or punches, this style hits pressure points in your body, again not too powerful but it can make you not be able to move due to the pressure point effect. When she uses this martial arts style with her ability, it can almost be paralyzing. Karen also usually carries a knife around with her, but she only uses it to draw the opponent's attention to it so she can let their guard down and get closer to them distance wise easier.
-The pain of this is not like getting bruises or broken bones, it's more of sending the pain to the core of your bone, if they aren't strong and built, it's likely that their body part that was hit loses some of its strength temporarily. It basically feels like your foot falling asleep except like 10 times stronger.

-She's still developing so she might mess up every so often.
-She doesn't have much endurance, so she doesn't like fighting with fast people that run a lot.
-This is most effective on people who rely on their strength and defense.

» Biography: It was indeed not a very good idea, but Karen was walking around the city by herself, she was lost. Just thinking to herself that she can just ask someone and it would be fine, but she wanted to be alone like this for awhile longer. After getting really, really lost and didn't know where the heck she was, she found a group of.... Kids? Yes, kids. Fighting. She was surprised. She was really /really/ excited. She never talked to them, but she just watched them, fight. She became a frequent visitor, she went to the same spot everyday to spy on those kids. She became to admire them. Fighting for themselves. Training for themselves. This is exactly what she wanted. Gathering up all her courage, she got herself to talk to them to see if she could join their "group". /will update later/
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Ancestors history:
Karen is 1/24 Raiju, which is a yokai (or monster) that created lightning, and people were told that the lightning was the Raiju's claws. The Raiju's powers had adapted to the modern world, taking advantage of the modern technologies.  Karen's mother never knew she had an ancestor Raiju, so she never bothered to try bringing up their ability of creating/controlling lightning. Karen still does not know that her ancestor was a Raiju, she only was able to bring up the power because she was desperate into finding a special ability within her, it was mostly her will and practice. Once she understands fully about her ancestors, her power will become more powerful, but that's wayyyy in the future.
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» History:
   Karen use to be the typical sweet, polite, little girl that loved to be praised and grew up with lots of love from her parents. She was always asking to help with their chores, and tried to be helpful to her parents when they needed the help. Not only was she kind to her parents, but she also was great with other kids and adults, she was often the girl in class that solved all the problems, if a fight broke out between the students, she would go up to them and stop them, even letting them hurt her to stop the fight. Karen, overall was that child that did the best in her studies and had a great personality. Everybody loved her and she was always making new friends, both girls and boys. 

   However, it wasn't only Karen in her family that was superior and excellent with everything. She had a very successful family, her mother was at the head of the film production company and her father was the top martial arts teachers, he was always asked to teach other's students, earning great amount of money just from him teaching. She couldn't have been happier with her life. 

   This life of hers only lasted for seven years.
Being the successful and rich family they were, her family decided to take a short break from their busy jobs and go on a vacation. The place wasn't too far, only a few hours away, so the family decided to take the train to enjoy the view while riding to their hotel. Karen, very eager to go on a vacation she hasn't been in a long time, and told her parents she definitely wanted to go. 

   Once they were aboard on the train, something was wrong. The staff seemed like they were in a rush and some were panicking and wiping their sweat off from the nervousness. Karen decided to not care, and the train started. She was relieved that the train was running on the tracks smoothly until the speaker above the seats were on, "Ah- testing, testing." She assumed it was the driver of the train, but something was wrong. "Welcome aboard, everybody. We are sorry to announce this, but we have a bomb set in this train." The train was silent for a split second before everybody started panicking. Some were still in the state of shock and wasn't doing anything, many were crying, a small portion of them even fainted. Karen was just confused and didn't know what was going on. "Mommy? Daddy? What's going on?" She realized they were in the state of shock, clutching their fists so hard that their knuckles were turning white. Her Mother turned to her and answered her with a shaky voice, "It-It's going to be a-alright honey, just stay with mommy and daddy alright?" Karen only nodded, she was becoming nervous. She has never seen her parents like this. 

   She noticed a man was starting to jump off the train through the window, and again, the speaker was on, "No sir, please don't, if you get off then we will set the bomb off and everybody in here will, ah let's see...Die" The voice was laughing. The man trying to jump out the window didn't stop, perhaps he wasn't even listening to the speaker. Everybody on the train tried to stop him, some pulled on his leg to get him to not jump off, but the look on his face didn't change, it was traumatized and his eyes seemed as if it was looking at nothing, he was only trying to save his own life. 
Then there he went. Off the train.
   "We warned you" The voice in the speaker said. Then there was one click that everybody heard. There was a second of silence, but soon there was a deafening sound of a huge explosion, glass breaking, floors cracking. Metal breaking. the last thing Karen remembered was her parents desperately covering her. Then Karen lost her consciousness and blacked out. 

    The next thing she saw were women in white coats with rubber gloves on. "Ah, did you regain your consciousness? Can you talk? Do you need anything?" The women's voice was soothing, and full of sympathy. "Where's mommy and daddy?" Karen immediately asked, getting up from the bed she was in, but she felt extreme pain in her whole right arm, and her whole back stung badly. "Oh don't get up yet, your forearm is broken, your back burned and you got hit in the head, so don't get up yet" Karen obeyed and laid back down. It felt like everything was a dream, the speakers, and the big noise that she heard. Karen was wondering what she should be doing right now, and was about to fall back asleep until she heard the murmuring of the nurse's voices. 
"Have you heard that the terrorists attacked the train? And from rumors the bomb set off because a man was trying to jump off the train!"
"Oh no, How scary. The girl must have lost her parents in that too." 
"Yes, I'm sure she did"
Hearing that, Karen immediately knew they were talking about herself. Filled with shock, she was traumatized for a great amount of time. Night after night she cried herself to sleep, whispering how much she missed them every night in the hospital room. 
    After a month of shock and despair she started to feel nothing for everything else besides anything about her parents. She became extremely rude to adults, and she forgot how to truly smile and laugh from the bottom of her heart. Every smile she gave after that was fake. All just for show. At age nine, she was taken to the orphanage and spent her life there for another couple months, there, Karen was known for being the "unfriendly, or rude girl", but one day a couple in their late 30's adopted her. They treated her like she was their own child, but Karen couldn't get herself to love them like she loved her real parents. She often left the house without letting them know, and found an empty, quiet field to have a time by herself. Then the memories of the nurses talking came back to her, then something clicked inside of Karen.

    "That's right.. I can fight for myself. I can destroy them... I can kill the terrorists and bury them in misery just like they did to me.." Then for the first time in two years she had smiled from the bottom of her heart, but it was a little different, her smile right now was more filled with hate, and revenge. Karen started to train herself again with systema, her Father has taught her since she was a toddler, and she had a talent for it. She had completely forgotten it until now. She joined many dojo's to train herself into the shape she was two years ago, and she easily earned a black belt at age 10. She was asked if she wanted to start to compete, but she rejected their offer, since the only thing she wanted now was revenge. 

"That's right, I can fight for myself. I can fight for my parents. I can fight with this body my parents gave me.."


Likes: 
+Bando Eido members
+Her (real) parents
+Fighting
+Winning
+Unique/Unusual things
+cute things 
+(Usually) Other children
+Art
+Tidying things up
+Electricity
+Thunder/Lightning
+Lying
+Making clever remarks
+Friends (doesn't show it)
+Running (for a short amount of time)
+Hiding
+Drawing
+Playing with dolls (but her parents once found one of her dolls with a nail stabbed through it ||'D )
+Acting 
+Pissing people off
+Fruit punch
+Cookies and cream ice cream cake
+Kind people
+Strong people

Dislikes:
-Wimps
-Wimps
-Wimps
-Did I say wimps yet
-Oh and wimps.
-half-assed anything (thoughts, actions, etc)
-Dirty/Messy things
-Lazy people
-Strangers/Older people (middle aged)  in general (except for parents of course)
-Clumsy/Dull people (they get on her nerves)
-Arguments she can't win over
-Spicy food
-Bell peppers
-Swimming
-Anything that has to do with building endurance
-Sweating
-Getting blood all over her clothe/body (small amount is fine)
-People who are full of themselves
-Heat
-Fire
-extreme temperatures/weather
-Loud noises



Extra:
-She likes to name all her "moves" to make it sound cool 8'D
-She wears a glove so she doesn't accidentally electrocute anyone she doesn't want to
- She's actually really good at cooking for an 11 year old but doesn't like to admit it because she thinks it gives her off the "feminine house wife" kind of feel which she hates.
-Her non-blood related parents both worked at a restaurant so they kind of made her learn how to cook in their free time to let her forget some of the stress. (She did enjoy it a little bit, since she is a child after all)
-She still lives with her "parents", she attends school normally, but leaves in the middle of the day with a clever excuse to go fight or something. She's still good in studies, she just misses out on the homework. Also she sleeps in class from going out late at night to go visit her alliance members.
-Her dress is made of material that can create static energy easily
-She talks in a really monotone way, she never yells, but you can always sense harshness and cold in her voice. She even says those ridiculous offensive comments in a calm way. This pisses a lot of people off
-She chooses to dress this way to look innocent so people underestimate her and let their guards down
-She's especially strong (academically) in Science because she wanted to have her powers more under control by learning about them. 

Hobbies:
-When she has time, she draws out weapons she would like in the future, and maybe even make some herself.
-Taking photographs

Personal Possessions:
-Handkerchief she received from her real parents for her sixth birthday
-Knives
-skiLL
-Sketchbooks

:new: Extra:
-She's deathly afraid of fire, extreme heat and really loud noises because of her past (losing parents in a bomb explosion)
Possible reaction(s) towards them:
-Squatting down and covering her ears/eyes
-Lots of tears
-shaking
-Loss of control 
-Extreme insecurity and discomfort
-Minor hallucination (depends how bad it is) 
-Vomiting 
-Screaming/yelling (L OL) 
-Also she clings to who ever she is with and starts to see them as her Guardian or parent and she sometimes claims that she is going to lose them.

This is what happened when she encountered her fears one time (basically an example):
"Stop it... Stop it!!!!! I don't want to lose you, please don't go, make it stop make it stop make it STOP!!! Please..." Her voice was shaky, her throat tightened with every word she said.  One after another, tears dropped down her face in total anxiety and panick. 

^That's basically a major situation like a bomb explosion near by, or encountering a lot of flames. Of course, small amount like kitchen fire and stoves just cause minor discomfort, but if it's a lot she would completely lose her shit.
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KYAAA, she's way too pretty!